blog #23

The thesis and draft plan for my essay had to be created. What the thesis is basically the lat sentence of the introduction saying what the essay is going to be about. The thesis that I had to create was on myspace and facebook two social networking websites. This time I did not have that much trouble creating my thesis because I had done it before and knew what needed to be suspected. My tutor helped me with the thesis I had already wrote it down and got her opinion on it which turned out pretty good on my part. The draft plan of my essay was not the way I expected it. I got to the point but did not have a way of making it look like the way I wanted it to. There were mistakes that I had made but I was able to see them along with my group member’s help. I did what I had to for the sake of my essay. I got threw and did my draft well at least I created a plan for it. The plan really helped me out a lot so that was the good thing I got out of it.